Revisions based on last night's conversation with Tone:
- Changed Harad'ha to Kazuks
- Changed Osketh to Pendara
I'm also writing on the scene where Gariel and Prince Ilghaza arrive at the mountain to the Nandari Gate. I'm liking the suggestion of making the "shadowgate" (may change that name) into a trans-dimensional skein portal. What else could it be?
Well...just a few more paragraphs tonight. Tired.